How to write emails

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Writing good emails is the key competency in any job in my opinion.
Here is my checklist on how to craft good emails and one example.

  • Make it scannable.
  • Lead with your ask.
  • Establish your credibility (if contacting someone new).
  • Propose next steps.
  • Give a deadline.
  • If asking a question, propose a solution.
  • Write your subject lines like article headlines.
  • Preview all messages on your smartphone.
  • Edit all your emails. Never use the first draft.

Here's an example. Lines starting with # are comments.

To: editor@magazine.com
# Headline type subject
Title: Cooperation on article on crafting emails?

Dear Peter,

# Lead with the ask 
do you want to cooperate with me on an article on
writing good emails?

# Establish credibility 
I have been writing 10+ high-ranking articles
on crafting emails in magazines such as GQ (link) and Harper's
Bazaar (link) and got hundreds of positive responses from readers.
I think that your magazine could profit from my expertise.

# Propose next steps 
If you give me your "okay" for considering the
idea, I can send you an outline within 4 working days.

# Give a **deadline**
Could you please send me a "yes" or "no" by next
Monday, 02, Month, Year so we both can move forward?

Best Martin
Go deeper
  • Disclaimer: A lot of these tips come from the book Writing Without Bullshit that I tweak to my style and experience.
  • Check this post for more general advice on how to ask for feedback
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